just words...

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by the charismatic_enigma (Zone BBS Addict) on Wednesday, 20-Apr-2011 1:26:27

In the name of this day
And
In the name of this day’s sorrow:
Sorrow that stands, disdaining the blossoming garden of Life,
Like a forest of dying leaves
A forest of dying leaves that is my country
An assembly of pain that is my country

In the name of the sad lives of clerks,
In the name of the worm-eaten hearts and the worm-eaten tongues
In the name of the postmen
In the name of the coachmen
In the name of the railway workers
In the name of the workers in the factories
In the name of him who is Emperor of the Universe, Lord of All Things,
Representative of God on Earth,
The farmer
Whose livestock has been stolen by tyrants,
Whose daughter has been abducted by bandits
Who has lost, from his hand’s breadth of land,
One finger to the record keeper
And another to the government as tax,
And whose very feet have been trampled to shreds
Under the footsteps of the powerful.

In the name of those sad mothers
Whose children cry out in the night
And will not be silenced by the defeated arms of sleep,
Who will not say what saddens them
Or be consoled by tears or entreaties.

In the name of those beauties
The flowers of whose eyes
Blossomed from every curtain and balcony
And withered away in waiting.

In the name of those wives
Whose unloved bodies
Have grown tired of the treachery of beds
In the name of the widows
In the name of neighbourhoods
Whose scattered garbage the moon
Blesses every night,
And from whose shadows cries out
The fragrance of veils
The tinkling of bangles
The scent of loosened hair
The smell of passionate bodies burning in their own sweat.

In the name of students
Who went to the masters of drums and banners
Prostrating themselves on doorsteps
With their books and pens
Praying, with open arms, to be heard,
But never returned.
Those innocents, who, in their naivete
Took their tiny lamps,
Their candle flames of hope, to where
The shadows of endless nights were being given out.

In the name of those prisoners
In whose breasts the shining gem of the future
Burns, polished by the noise of the jailer’s night,
To a star like radiance.

In the name of those harbingers of the days to come
Who, like the flower with its scent,
Have become enamoured of their own message

Post 2 by contradiction (aww, I always knew my opinion mattered to you!) on Wednesday, 20-Apr-2011 1:43:53

awww, faraaz. that's so beautiful, i love it. it's so real, so palpable and it painted a vivid picture in my head. nice work. :)

Post 3 by Shadow_Cat (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Thursday, 21-Apr-2011 22:08:24

It does paint a very vivid and sad picture. Am I right in thinking that you're talking about all the innocents, all the every day people and civilians, whose lives are ruined by the wars between countries? Or am I missing your point, Faraaz?

Post 4 by the charismatic_enigma (Zone BBS Addict) on Thursday, 21-Apr-2011 22:28:12

no you got it, and before people start jumping down my throat, its not just palestine, iraq, or afghanistan. i'm talking everyone, from chechnia, cosivo in that war. bosnia which is still to this day picking itself up. any terrorist attack home or abroad. we are all human beings, oh but wait i'm a muslim. i have no simpathy and empathy for people write?

Post 5 by Shadow_Cat (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Friday, 22-Apr-2011 11:53:18

It's pretty clear that this is for innocents who suffer all over the world due to war and other atrocities. I sincerely hope people don't jump down your throat on this.

Post 6 by the charismatic_enigma (Zone BBS Addict) on Saturday, 23-Apr-2011 0:26:52

i wouldn't count on it. i'm a mean spirrited muslim, who only defends the muslims, and doesn't give a damn about anyone else, there for automaticly i'm labled as such. ignorence is bliss write?